Wednesday, September 11, 2013

An excerpt from a diary-style story I am writing. I hope I really caught the emotion for this scene.




  It had been some years after my new life when I created held an epiphany I had snuck into an orphanage one night. I had a new idea for my soul  research and I needed a child. Their medical ward contained the terminally ill children, and I melded into the shadows to find the child that would be dead, less blood on my hands. These….scam artists that tended to these children would give them false pretenses, they lied to them and would tell them that they would be ok; their sickness would just go away, that they were going to get cured soon. Filthy dogs, all of them. The kids knew their time was up, they were abandoned children, considered a burden upon their parents and dumped to die without having to pay a cent. These so called healers just took them in to use the money for themselves, letting the children die to make more room.
            A girl left in a solitary room caught my eye. I remembered how the room was an ugly canary yellow, with faded rainbows and dragons painted on the walls. I remembered the doctors telling this girl that she had Blood Lung, which I knew was a debilitating sickness that caused the afflicted to eventually cough up bloody chunks of their rotting lungs. It was a quite painful death that was lined up for that girl, but they just gave her a sugar pill and told her she would be fine, at least give the child some real medicine if you were going to lie to her....
            I waited for the doctors to leave, and I took my cue. It was late, the moonlight cut a beautiful glow from the window. I remembered how her skin glowed from the radiant moonbeams. I heard her weak coughs as she tried to sleep. I stood over her bed, and with one gaunt hand I lightly stroked her head.
            The subtle touch woke her from her sleep. I remembered those blue eyes of hers locking into mine. Then her gaze shifting to my smile, and she smiled back. I was confused, she had no fear, most children would cry out that the "Grinning Gheist" had come (I had become a sort of bogeyman for parents to threaten their kids with).
            “Are you a doctor sir?” She wheezed, her throat strained from her plague.
            “Yes my little cherub, I am Doctor Edgar Von Engel.” I cooed at her, one scrawny finger scratching under her chin.
            Her eyes lit up when she heard my name; she even attempted a weak giggle. “Your name means angel in old Elven!” she said with her smile, I noticed she was missing her two front teeth.
“Yes” I remembered saying while musing over my own name, “and this angel is going to make you better.” I said holding out my hand.
            She began a fit of coughing and her body went limp, passing out from the pain in her body. I recalled my sudden sense of urgency; I had to bring her back to the lab.
            Within a couple hours I remembered I had begun the process of strapping this young girl down to my work table.  I remembered hearing something that was in between the coo of a dove and the cry of a puppy, the little girl had awoken while I was preparing the vessels that I would house her soul in.
            “Mr. Edgar?” She coughed out, “Where are we?”
            “Like I said my dear, I am going to save you.” I remembered repeating that phrase  many times, I don’t remember if I kept repeating it in my head or out loud, but I remembered that she would always smile when she saw my face, and, as always, I wore my grin. I liked that way of thinking, she seemed to always grin and bear it, even though her body was wracked by terrible pain, she always found the strength to smile at me, a complete stranger that promised her “salvation.”
            The machine had prepared my greatest vessel to date. A small ruby, the size of a finger nail, had been energized by arcane electricity and previous soul magics. I was hoping to transfer the girl's soul into such a vessel, to hopefully anchor it to the material world.
            “What is your name my sweet?”
            “I-its Elheim, Elheim van Gottlieb.” She managed to wheeze out.
Her surname means God’s Love in the old tongue…is it fate that the Angel shall save god’s love? (I continue to muse this thought to myself to this day.)
            I did not close the mask over her face; I remember staring into her eyes, those bright blue pools, swirling with a maelstrom of life, full of love that would be forever un-shared. I remembered taking a moment to lightly stroke her face, it was then I had realized that she was running out of time. Her eyes were glazing over, and her breathing was becoming sporadic. I remembered not taking any joy into what I usually felt was the best part of extracting a soul. I summoned my blade, which at the tip contained the phylactery crystal, which could hopefully absorb the soul for me.
            I raised it slowly, and whispered softly, "one, two, and three…" then, silence. I remembered looking down, my dagger glowed a faint purple as the child’s body faded into dust.
            I broke the ruby off of the blade, letting the bleeding sword dissipate in thin air. I cradled the glowing gem in my hand, had I done it? Of course I did! But this was only a small essence of what I needed. The ruby was warm to the touch, I could almost feel it beating like a heart, and I felt.....happy? No.....it was more of a "free" feeling, like chains had unbound themselves to me. I felt...her. I was then brought back to the present.


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